Reflection

I definitely agree with the comments that were made about my paper. I noticed that I used very great examples in my writing, as well as a strong conclusion. However, I also have to agree that I could have used more detailed and specific wording, along with a more attention-grabbing introduction. I hope to improve drastically on these two main things in my Compare and Contrast essay. I will strive to do this by maybe confiding more in a thesaurus, and also read the powerpoint online to assist me in finding a "hook" for my introduction. My goal is to make my next essay as flawless as possible and also make it more interesting for the reader to enjoy.