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She went to the seashore, found some seashells, picked them up, and put them into a basket. Then, she went home with a basketful of seashells. She took the shells out of the basket and placed them on a dinette table. Then, she brought jeweler's tools to the table and pierced holes in the shells. After that, she strung the shells on small chains of gold and silver. She ended up making twenty necklaces and sold him for $10 a piece. After making a profit of $175, she went to the shore again. This time, she could afford to stay for a week.